Wonderful, imaginative writing. This piece is wickedly clever! Congrats on getting published in so many places. - j
I liked your story, Tom. The contrast between the first picture you painted of a big, loud man mowing the lawn with his gun in his belt and the second picture of him as a harried and henpecked husband caused me to change my opinion of him within a few seconds. Well done!
I WILL REJECT ANY CHINESE OR JAPANESE IDIOMATIC WRITING, AUTOMATICALLY.